VENDING MACHINES

It will be good to have vending machines at schools because it helps school profit.A vending machine does not only provide snacks, but also have water and other drinks.It is also good for staff so they can get food.This is why it is bad it is bad to have vending machine because there will be no space, and they are a lot of money and you will need the money for school supplies such as pens, pencils, books and more and more you don’t want children walking around with money and they could waste money and feeding themselves in stead of there family, they could lose it or somebody will snatch it, you could get bullied because you don’t have any money and that is why you don’t want a vending machine!

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