Chapter 1- wake up

One day Henry woke up in the deep,dark forest with his Cheetah Olivier.He was where darkness rises and sunlight disappears. He saw the brown leaves falling off the long bark tree.

To come later-

His cheetah saw a wizard so he got Henry and Henry went and he met a key on the floor he reckoned it could open any door he zapped away like a olympic runner running.

What else do you think I can put in my story.

By Nelson Hakeem.