Long Writing : Descriptive Writing:

In this uncrowded village, I can see that the air is polluted

and I can see a few huts.

There are also people carrying jugs on their heads

for them to get water from the standpipe.I can see that

the people are not wearing shoes and so the village is

quite dirty. There is also the sound of chickens eating the

food that a kind man gave them. I can see that the water

is quite cold and heavy too.Since the air is polluted, I can

tell that the smell of the air is not that pleasant. I can also see some

greenery around.Some greenery are trees, plants and

grass. Probably a bird comes and stays on this village

trees . In this picture it is nearly sunset. It looks like it was going to be a very sunny and hot day .I can also tell that there is the sound of the river flowing by . It looks quite dirty.

My opinion is that I wouldn't live in this village because the smell is awful, the sight is dirty, the water is cold, it is noisy and the chickens' food is smelly.