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Dear Diary

30.01.17

Last night I trapped the Iron Man. It all started with me trying to get a fox to stop eating my hens and chickens. So I got one of the dead chickens that my dad threw away,then I put put it on the enormous, deep hole that the farmers had made. After that I climbed up a tree.,I looked back at the dead chicken, unfortunately, it was gone. I thought to my self;I shouldn't have turned around.

I looked back,but where was the fox.Suddenly I saw the big green eyes like headlamps again.At that moment,I saw... The Iron Man!! I turned around once ,just once and the Iron Man was gone.I thought to myself if the Iron Man was coming to eat me.Whilst,I was thinking I saw the Iron Man eating the wired-fence.Then, I remembered that I had a nail and knife in my pocket and then tapped them together.CLICK.CLICK.CLICK.The Iron Man stopped.My hands started shaking but I kept on going.CLICK! CLICK! CLICK!

The Iron Man started walking towards me.I was still kept on making that noise.CLICK! CLICK! CLICK!The Iron Man was getting closer,but then CRASH! The Iron Man fell into the hole.The deep deep down I saw the Iron Man scratching the soil walls,I ran everywhere saying"I CAUGHT THE IRON MAN!" Everyone came out celebrating.

After that,I felt ambivalent; on one hand I felt relived one the second hand, I felt sorry for the Iron Man.The farmers started to bury him alive.I took one last look at the Iron Man,pretending to hate him.Now all I could see was soil.I didn't know I'd feel sorry for him. Everyone was stepping one the soil.I felt guilty for what I did.

Hope you like it my diary entry. Ruwaida Mohamed Larch Year 5