Alvy, 6F

Pobble 365: March 30th, 2020


Story Starter!


It was some kind of a man, but still half way through completely evolving from an ape. Its shoulders were hunched like an old man with woeful posture. The creature's head was glistening from the on coming sunlight, due to the bare, bald skin on its head. It was wearing what seemed to be simply tattered, old and filthy rags, worn only around the neck, waist and hanging down across its chest.

Somehow, the creature walked through the window, only it seemed that the being couldn't walk in a straight line but instead limped zig-zaggidly across the room to where Stephanie (the king's daughter) stood, paralysed to the spot. Finally she came to her senses.

"Who are you?" she asked nervously.

"Me name's Lecton Bilich."

"But..." stuttered Stephanie, "...more to the point: what are you?"

"Well, I'm a relative of human, but actually called a Horge. A magical creature, that's basically a flying human, and - unless you want to stay and get slaughtered and eaten for supper - the one who's going to save you." At this news Stephanie fainted. But nevertheless, Bilich took it as a command to take her on his back, into the sky, and into another land; one where the inhabitants wouldn't try to kill her, but use her to rise to power over the whole world...


To be continued... (I haven't got the time to write a whole book)


Sentence Challenge!


The boy, who was 9 years old, got on the bus.


Sick sentences!


Sobbing, the girl sat in the tower. She was hopelessly trying to spin straw into gold for the greedy king. The room was enormous and drafty. Suddenly, out of the corner of her eye, she spotted a creature appear at the window.


Question Time!

A: The two characters in the picture are the miller's daughter and some sort of creature.

A: A horribly gruesome fate is a nasty death.

A: I think the king is a greedy man because he wants more and more gold even though he's probably already got a lot.

A: I think the miller is feeling very hard done by because the king has no right to threaten what he's threatening.

A: A miller is a person who owns or works in a corn mill.

A: So far I think Rumpelstiltskin is good.

A: I only know a few but I don't like any of them.