Valentina has used this week’s 100 word challenge prompt to write a short story. Can you leave a comment to help improve her writing?

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Pepper    Crocodile    Orange    Forgot    Soft

It woz a fine sunny afternoon and timmy Pepper was resting by the side of the muddy lake. as he laid they’re he could sea the water rippling and something swaying beneaf the surface. Timmy ran his fingers through his soft, curly hair and wondered what it could be. Soon afta he could see something rising above the surface. Oh no what is that. A CROCODILE! Aah!!! He grabbed his rucksack and out fell an orange which he forgot had been given to him by his mother earlier. He threw it towards the crocodile to distract him and sped off.