My name is Peter, from year 6 Green.

Today, I'm going to show you my piece of work from my homework.

I had to write a description of a new person in the WRINKLE IN TIME

book.

It goes like this:

As Meg looked up, she saw a ragged clothed man.

As the ragged clothed man saw Meg staring at

him, he suddenly turned invisible leaving a very

bad smell.

Meg just can see the ragged man.

"What is your name?" Meg asked calmly.

The man replied "Well, my name is Jack, but

you can call me Rubber."

As he was talking about his miserable life, he

wasn't invisible anymore. Then Charles, Calvin

and Meg know how he looked like now, they were discusted.

The man said "Why do that face to me? I can

Change bodies if you want me to."

"Can your really do that!" Said Charles with exitment.

"YYEESS." He said in a weird voice.

As Charles, Calvin and Meg whatched with with amazment,

The man looked like a famouse singer from a different

country.

"His appearance can look like anything." Meg

whisperd to her self.

"What was that Meg?" Asked the man.

"How do you know my big sister's name, and why

Did you asked her what was that?!" Charles

commanded.

"I have phycick powers, can't you see, I can

do anything in my life." Jack said.

All three of the children's mouths were open but

the speech lost it's way from their throughts.

"Are you that intelegent?" Calvin asked.

"Just like I said again, I, can, do, anything, in, my, life." Jack said so slowly.

"Do you have a quick bath or something because,

I'm not trying to be rude but, your a bit smelly." Said Meg.

"Oh, wow, you smell so nice, amazing." Everyone said.

Well that is it guys and my teacher called Caroline I think thats how you spell it

She replied

"Exellent writing, Peter! Well done fo using interesting vocabulary.

A VERY BIG THANK YOU FOR READING MY WORK.