Alvy, 6F

Pobble 365 : On The Prowl

Story Starter!

Reef went to pick up the phone. He changed his form (from a tiger) into a human so that he could talk. Dennis looked up before changing back to his human form as well.

"It's Reef Tabbet speaking, what can I do ya for?" he asked, in his traditional low voice. The other end of the line spoke...

"Reef, thank god you picked up! We need you, now! It's Tony from the force, you must come." The familiar voice that had called Reef and Dennis to so many of their missions came muffled from the other end of the line. Reef's expression tightened, he was suddenly more serious.

"Where?"

"Diceon Square, the jewellery shop. There's been an armed robbery, there's two of 'em," replied Tony.

"We'll be there," growled Reef and hung up. "We've got business," he said to Dennis, "Let's go."

Twenty minutes later Reef and Dennis were sneaking up on Diceon square, in the form of cheetahs: stealthy but also fast. As they neared the square they changed into wasps and flew into the jewellery shop. It took them only a few minutes to find the culprits; and, one of them hovering behind each of the thieves, they changed into human form and cuffed them.

Sentence Challenge!

The sky was a fantastic blue and the magnificent orange of the tiger sparkled under the glow of the sky. The greenery swayed gracefully in the delicate evening breeze.

Blue : Turquoise. Green : Emerald. Orange : Apricot. Black : Brunet

Using these words make the writing seem more poetic and descriptive.

Sick Sentences!

The elegant tiger drank from the pool that was sparkling in the sunlight. It was ferociously huge and the colour of an apricot. It had brunet stripes. The top predator silently held its deadly body close to the soil as it drank.

Question Time!

In the picture it's the evening.

I think only one tiger is drinking from the pool because the other one might not want a drink or is preoccupied.

I think the tigers know each other because otherwise they might not seem so relaxed as they do in the picture.