Dear Van Dyck,I saw your amazing painting of Princess Henrietta. I really liked it. It is showing everyone how fantastic Henrietta is. It is wonderful but you could improve it a bit more. First you could make the lady more rich by putting bags of gold and silver around her. Next you can put more expensive jewellery on her like a diamond necklace and a silver tiara. Lastly you can give her a more beautiful dress so she can stand out much more than she already is. Any way I still think that how you put the dagger in the flower that was on Henrietta’s dress was showing that she was powerful and proud of herself. One more thing that you could improve on is you can give her more pages so you can make her look more rich and like she rules the world and can do anything she likes. I also saw your other ones they were good as well.