Dubai

Dubai is a city that was made by man. It has the tallest skyscrapers in the world.There are very rich people that lives there .Dubai is surrounded by deserts and people use camels to travel .It has the most amazing beaches and luxurious hotels and shops of every brand you can imagine.There is horse racing which attracts lots of people and there are the highest prizes and the most beautiful horses.I wish to go there to see all these things .Dubai is very nice at New Years Eve because there are very nice celebrations.

Well done Brianna. You can see what I have corrected which is in red.