English 22nd April


I don't think primary schools should have vending machines because having a machine in schools, even one that sells healthy snacks like, cheese strings or milk can still cause problems for people with dairy allergies.

I think water should always be free in school for children to have.

It is not a good idea selling snacks like chocolate, crips and fizzy drinks because it will make people unhealthy.

I also think it will be a problem for children to be carrying money around and will be unfair on those that can't afford to use the machine.

I think we already get a good balance diet from our school dinners, which I love.


Remember:

  1. when writing a balanced argument you should have both sides and then your opinion!