pobble

About: Queen bee

Sick sentences

1. The forest was foggy.

2. It was filled with the sound of bees.

3. The bees went around.

Up graded sentences

1. The light was slipping through the leave’s fingers. The forest floor was cracking all of a sudden. Fog surrounding the forest floor. Surrounding the emerald green leaves. A noise.

2. The misty fog covering everything in it’s path was now above my head. The noise was getting closer. Running for my live it was like the noise was chasing me as if it was next to me. A buzzing noise spread through the forest. I stopped were bees chasing me.

3. As the fog cleared away I looked straight into the furry, tiny eyes of a swarm of bees.They started hovering towards me .I ducked thinking that they were goind to sting me or attack me .But nothing, one of the bigger, more important bees was badly hurt, she had a black ,deep wounded which was dripping on her back and a sprinted and broken leg. I couldn’t bare seeing everyone so sad that I agreed, the bees handed me her over with there tiny ,little, furry hands.Since that day our agreement has carried on I haven’t been lonely ever again……Until now.

About:Queen Bee

Sick sentences

1. The forest was foggy.

2. It was filled with the sound of bees.

3. The bees went around.

Up graded sentences

1. The light was slipping through the leave’s fingers.The forest floor was cracking all of a sudden.Fog surrounding the forest floor.Surrounding the emerald green leaves.A noise.

2. The misty fog covering everything in it’s path was now above my head.The noise was getting closer.Running for my live it was like the noise was chasing me as if it was next to me.A buzzing noise spreaded through the forest.I stopped were bees chasing me.

3. As the fog cleared away I looked straight into the furry, tiny eyes of a swarm of bees.They started hovering towards me .I ducked thinking that they were goind to sting me or attack me .But nothing, one of the bigger, more important bees was badly hurt, she had a black ,deep wounded which was dripping on her back and a sprinted and broken leg. I couldn’t bare seeing everyone so sad that I agreed, the bees handed me her over with there tiny ,little, furry hands.Since that day our agreement has carried on I haven’t been lonely ever again……Until now.