I have just saw your painting for the first time and I want to tell you my thoughts I really liked the Page in the background and she looked really realistic the other thing I liked was the lady in a black and white dress and when the lady put her hand on The Page’s shoulder. I didn’t really like the bush at the background because it was really messy and dark coloured and It would be better if it was a lighter green the other thing I didn’t like was the painting was really dark I would like it if it was a little brighter and if it had more colours.