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He jumped over the hurdles under water continuously until he was first.
He was eager to win the race because it was the first under water Olympics.
he swimming very quickly , but other athletes were catching up with him soon he was already nearly first but then he had an idea he pretended to fall on the jumping thingy and hurt himself
then 2 of the athletes came to help him. Then he quickly got up and swam over them as fast as
lighting and went into first place but then he saw that he wasn't actually 1st3 he was 2nd! then he became 3rd he couldn't take it any more. he used sonic speed and swam to 1st place then he won the race
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