Sick sentences!



Robin crouched on the rock. Improvement: Robin crouched sacredly on the giant bolder.

Robin drew an arrow from the quiver and put it on the string. Improvement: Robin drew a pointy arrow from his quiver and put it on the springy string.

Robin drew the bow. Improvement: Robin stared at the target and drew the bow carefully.

He was strong. Improvement: He was mighty and fierce , strong as an ox.

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