The hole in the Fence. Finn H

My whole

body seemed to be moving. Suddenly…Pop! The floor beneath my feet started crumbling.

First I thought it was an earthquake but, then I realized if it was an earthquake

the ground would be shaking and then that’s when I saw nothing. Everything went

black…..

When I woke up surprising I wasn’t in my bed or on the couch, I was in a cave. There were torches around me I was curiously looking around I saw the hole that I dramacically feel into, when I was trying to look for a rope or something to get back up I found my toy car that was lost and dads lawnmower and the flower pot with mums favourite flowers that were ALL from our garden!!!!!

I saw the oak tree and I seen these strange creatures by it, I an not an animla expert

but I know that it was from the animal kingdom. Chills went down my back as I glazed

the creature from top to toe I was wondering why they were taking all the stuff

from our garden.

I quickly took my camera making sure not to drop it because I could scare the THING. i took a picture forgetiing there was a flash on the camera, Pop I landed back in my bedroom.

Question time!

If you could take a photograph of the 5

happiest moments of your life so far, what would they show?

What 5 events of your future would you like to

take a photograph of?

1.      

When I got my cat Dixie and when Georgie was born

2.      Going to Ewelease farm on my holidays

3.      Going to Chessington world of adventures

4.      Going to harry potter studios

5.      As I am saving up for an apple pen this will be my favourite in the future

Sick sentences!

These sentences are ‘sick’ and need help to get better. Can you

help? Could you add an adverb?

The boy slowly went towards the

fence. He curiously looked through the hole. He was excited.