Monday 5th January 2015

L. O. I can write a recount of my Christmas Holiday using connectives.

During my Christmas holiday my cousin Shanae came to my house. We played lots of games. Our favourite game was called treasure hunt. In this game the player has to search for a hidden toy. The next day my cousin and I, along with my uncle went to the cinema to watch Annie. The cinema was packed, however we managed to get seats. The film as amazing, we really enjoyed watching it. After we left the cinema we went back to my house.

The next day was Christmas day. As soon as I woke up I ran down the stairs and went into the living room. I looked under the Christmas tree and I saw lots of presents. Whilst I was ripping off the wrapping paper, my mouth opened wide in shock. There was my frozen scooter, sitting there, waiting to be ridden. Then we had a delicious dinner. We had stew. It was scrumptious.

By Aaliyah