Creating Suspense
Long, long ago
Far, far away a little born baby lay there. Crying. Where was is her mother, where was her father, did she have any family left. No. But what had happened to them has yet to be discovered. She was going to be named Columbine ( which in her language meant from Columbia ) What happened to her parents is so sad it'll have to be mentioned in part 2 . Anyway back to the story, she did have one or two people in her life, that was her maid and Jesus Christ. Now in her family, Jesus Christ came first and they prayed daily. But her family had something bad happen to them. Something very, very terrible...
Long, long ago
Far, far away a little born baby lay there. Crying. Where was is her mother, where was her father, did she have any family left. No. But what had happened to them has yet to be discovered. She was going to be named Columbine ( which in her language meant from Columbia ) What happened to her parents is so sad it'll have to be mentioned in part 2 . Anyway back to the story, she did have one or two people in her life, that was her maid and Jesus Christ. Now in her family, Jesus Christ came first and they prayed daily. But her family had something bad happen to them. Something very, very terrible...