Sick sentences task 4

1) The ship landed on the surface of the moon.

Improvement: The huge ship landed on the smooth, rocky surface of the moon.

2) Stars shone in the sky.

Improvement: The glimmering, sparkly stars shone in the deep blue sky.

3) The Astronauts could see the earth.

Improvement: The Astronauts were capable to see the there home the earth from space.

4) The sound of the engine was loud.

Improvement: The working sound of the engine was roaring as loud as a lion.

5) It was cold.

Improvement: The Astronauts were shivering as the harsh wind was blowing strongly as strong as an ox.