English with year 5
English with year 5
In the week year 5 have been watching and studying Edward scissorhands we made notes about the first scene and to match it up we made are own stories about Edward scissorhands like for example she got out her car she was scared but she had a shot she knocked on the door,because he was doing his new invention scissorhands he opened the door ...... and we watched some of the interesting Edward Scissorhands the story is about a boy who is in a castle and a avon lady comes and takes him home with her.
In the week year 5 have been watching and studying Edward scissorhands we made notes about the first scene and to match it up we made are own stories about Edward scissorhands like for example she got out her car she was scared but she had a shot she knocked on the door,because he was doing his new invention scissorhands he opened the door ...... and we watched some of the interesting Edward Scissorhands the story is about a boy who is in a castle and a avon lady comes and takes him home with her.
Then Peg's daughter comes back home and finds Edward in her bed and she has a shock when she saw Edward Scissorhands she thought he was a bugular. then later in the week we made an alternate ending .It was really dramatic Kevin nearly got run over by jealous boyfriend of Kiim and when jim tried to kill Edward but Edward killed vhim and the sad bit when Kim and Edward never saw each other again........
Then Peg's daughter comes back home and finds Edward in her bed and she has a shock when she saw Edward Scissorhands she thought he was a bugular. then later in the week we made an alternate ending .It was really dramatic Kevin nearly got run over by jealous boyfriend of Kiim and when jim tried to kill Edward but Edward killed vhim and the sad bit when Kim and Edward never saw each other again........
By Khalid and Jahmal
By Khalid and Jahmal