roller coaster writing

I strolled to the line shivering, shaking, we finally got there but I paused I was about to say i could not do it! there were butterflies whizzing racing through my spine i turned to my friend's to get some reashorence.I felt ready to go i walked on the the ride with shaking legs i clipped my belt on slowly.BUMP....BUMP....BUMP.....It crept slowly i started to get used to it but then AAAAARRRGGG! the scream got forced out of my mouth. Finally it came to a stop iv'e never felt so releved in my whole life.I gave my friend's a hug we all got of trembeling and all holding hands.