Hello Year 5!

Just a quick challenge for you today. Can you use the VCOP skills we use in Big Write to improve this BORING sentence?

The sentence is:

The creature went up the tree.

Improve the sentence using one of these:

V - Make better VOCABULARY choices.

C - Add a different CONJUNCTION.

O - Add a more creative OPENER

P - Adding intersting PUNCTUATION

Once you have your idea, reply this post with your new and improved sentence.

I look forward to reading your replies.

from

Lucy