The deep fallllllllllllllll
The deep fall .
My mum was taking me and Emma to the park that has a little pound right in the center .
So we put on our boots and set of ,it only took around three mins by walking to get there.
We walked to the center and saw the muddy pond .My mum wanted to investigate the creachers in side of it .But when she got too ! close the mud was much softer and slippery then I heard AAHH!!!!!!!!! it scared the life out of Emma .Mum fell upside down, she started to drawn, I told Emma to ask for some help, but there was know one round.
We try to get a big stick ,but she could not breath so she sadly died .
So we put on our boots and set of ,it only took around three mins by walking to get there.
We walked to the center and saw the muddy pond .My mum wanted to investigate the creachers in side of it .But when she got too ! close the mud was much softer and slippery then I heard AAHH!!!!!!!!! it scared the life out of Emma .Mum fell upside down, she started to drawn, I told Emma to ask for some help, but there was know one round.
We try to get a big stick ,but she could not breath so she sadly died .
And her body mite still be there now.you will see the brown boots.
By Tacy .M.