steps to success :
.rhetorical questions
.persuasive language
.emotional language
.groups of three
.rhetorical questions
.persuasive language
.emotional language
.groups of three
More school trips !!!!
Dear Mr van Terheyden ,
Are you bored of getting hot and fustrated in a little stuffed classroom?
We think we should have more school trips so we
can learn and have fun at the same time .
Well that's why we think we should have some more school trips
I'm pretty sure you agree with us its very boring being stuck in a classroom.
These are some of the trips we would like to go on:
Museums , parks , camping , Theme parks , cinema, boating , fishing , The London Eye
and lots more fun things also some trips related to our school topics. Don't you
think it would be really unfair if all the other classes get to go on trips and we don't ?
We also think that we should go to parks and get fresh air or its not fair ?
You don't want to make us upset do you ?
We think writing about school trips is a really good idea because we only get about two trips in year six and its our very last year at Clerkenwell so we should get more trips .
To conclude we think trips are a great way for kids to learn about topics in fun ways for example in year five we went to the museum to find out about our topic witch was the Victorians .
Brooke Hunt & Mia
yours scincerley
Are you bored of getting hot and fustrated in a little stuffed classroom?
We think we should have more school trips so we
can learn and have fun at the same time .
Well that's why we think we should have some more school trips
I'm pretty sure you agree with us its very boring being stuck in a classroom.
These are some of the trips we would like to go on:
Museums , parks , camping , Theme parks , cinema, boating , fishing , The London Eye
and lots more fun things also some trips related to our school topics. Don't you
think it would be really unfair if all the other classes get to go on trips and we don't ?
We also think that we should go to parks and get fresh air or its not fair ?
You don't want to make us upset do you ?
We think writing about school trips is a really good idea because we only get about two trips in year six and its our very last year at Clerkenwell so we should get more trips .
To conclude we think trips are a great way for kids to learn about topics in fun ways for example in year five we went to the museum to find out about our topic witch was the Victorians .
Brooke Hunt & Mia
yours scincerley
