Monday 27th April 2020

Pobble 365

Sick Sentences

These are the original

sentences.

The sky was grey and cloudy. She stood over the table looking at the jars. They contained stuff.

The stormy, gloomy sky punished who ever looked

up. She stood over the rocky table looking at the

jars knowing troublesome

mixtures are concocted.

They contained chemical acids that you could tell

wouldn't solve anything.

These are my new and improved sentences.