Monday 27th April 2020
Pobble 365
Sick Sentences
These are the original
sentences.
The sky was grey and cloudy. She stood over the table looking at the jars. They contained stuff.
The stormy, gloomy sky punished who ever looked
up. She stood over the rocky table looking at the
jars knowing troublesome
mixtures are concocted.
They contained chemical acids that you could tell
wouldn't solve anything.
These are my new and improved sentences.